The end of Term 2

 This term my class and I are making a blog post about our work that we are proud of, needing improvement and what I enjoyed. The post I'm proud of is my story book I had taken the right time to write my story book and I really am greatful that I have finished that I only had one mistake but I think it will be great that when a lot of people look at the hard work that I had put effort in they be able to create their very own story.

The work that I want to improve in is my Sir Peter Blake because I believe that it needs more working in there but I think I did those words are alright but I could do better in that. Everything that I put in their  should turn out OK dough.

The piece of work that I enjoyed is my food for thought because it can show the world what little kiwi's are learning in town I don't have anything else to say now but people should dream big.

language structure

Go here to check out my work that I think is good. For two or three weeks we have been learning about eels. The easy part about my report was getting all the facts that I could gather for my report. The very hard part of my report was doing my general statement and my closure statement. I could improve by putting more words in my report.

Soar

This is a story about a girl and a tiny boy. There is a link for you to see after the story if you don't know what a link is it's a thing that you can touch with your mouse. I created this for you to explore it might be too long for those who are not good at reading.I want you to see this wonderful story.

Soar

1. In the morning.
2. I saw a little person.
3. Light the bright blue star.

In the morning I was making aircraft planes. I put the final piece at the end of my aircraft plane and twisted it on tight so it won't collapse I took a breath in. Then I flew it in the crystal blue sky the sun was as bright  you can imagine  but the aircraft plane fell onto the windy grass I closed my eyes before it fell down. “CRASH” then opened them when it was finished I failed once again I walked over to my table feeling sad and miserable, I just felt like giving up.

To read the rest of my story follow this link.

A holiday I didn't do

   What I learnt today was that your not aloud to use trash words and that you need to put punctuation in. what I created is a holiday I didn't do so to make sure if it did happen I put it up. I shared it with everyone in the world to maybe have an idea of a new story. I liked that it was a great start.  


  Rainbow’s end.

1. When we went to rainbow's end.
2. We all went on the roller coaster.
3. The rainbow end  had closed.

Today I traveled to Rainbow end my mum, dad, C.j came along. We all were enjoying our candy floss it was amazing then we walked over to the baby section to watch C.j on the roller coaster mum laid eyes on her. It was funny when she finally finished it was hilarious then we headed over to have lunch it was delicious then we saw a family riding the biggest roller coaster even the little child wasn't scared   ridding it my mum said “wow that child is brave even c.j can handle that.” I said “that might be she could be scared” so well we all had a try.