This week we did paragraphs of my report we were learning about language features . I chose this one because I think its a great example out of my other paragraphs. The easy part was writing all my facts. The hard part was finding the information. I could improve by putting more information into my paragraph.
Diet
Whatever the eels eat depends on the size of any creature that crawls around the ocean. They eat slimy & slithery sea creatures they also eat snails all of those slimy & crawly creatures help them to get bigger and stronger. Long finned eels like to eat other eels and they eat anything that they can find out in the oceans, swamps and creeks. Short finned eels like to eat little thing like snails for instance long finned eels like to eat big things like seagulls and other eels.
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