Inquiry facts

Go here it will tell you what I learnt. Last week we were learning about inquiry facts about eels. The easy part was writing all the knowledge I learnt about eels. The hard part was to find the image that I needed.

Sorry poem

This week my class and I have been doing a sorry poem I think this might be a good one tell me if this is a good one.
               
Poem
I'm so sad
the earth is mad
keep the earth clean
and don't just walk away and be mean
so grow our trees
the earth will provide us with peas
make mother earth smile
and wait awhile.
 
So what do you think comment and see what you think about my sorry poem.

prime number

Hello. This week I have been learning about prime numbers the LI: Use prime numbers S.C: If I'm successful at my learning that I will know that there are no remainders. That it's divisible by itself. That 2 and 4 is the only prime numbers. If you don't believe me and my prime numbers here's my prove that I know about prime numbers.

There's my prof for you.

language structure

Go here to check out my work that I think is good. For two or three weeks we have been learning about eels. The easy part about my report was getting all the facts that I could gather for my report. The very hard part of my report was doing my general statement and my closure statement. I could improve by putting more words in my report.

language features

last week we have been learning about eels we had to do it in silent writing and it was great it got me thinking about all the information that popped up in my mind about eels. So I gathered all the information I had in my mind and this is what I got. So I think this might be enough information for you guys maybe for ideas that pops up in your mind that's good.

 Habitat

Short finned eels are often found in rivers, lakes and swamps. Short finned eels like to live far away from long finned eels so they can live in peace. Adult eels live a short life from 13-23 or 24. Long finned eels are maybe hard to find if you don’t know where to look.

       

                                                 Appearance

The eels live in rivers, creeks and oceans they live a short life then we do. When they try to live their life people go hunting for some eels but eels blend in with the bottom of the ocean so it's hard for people to catch them with their hands. Some eels are scared of people some eels try to scare them away to protect their little ones. Some eels are scared terrified even but when they grow up they start learning that some things are not quite scary after all. When they breathe in and suck up water or dirty water it helps them swim faster and better it also helps them to catch other things in the water or the ocean.

                                                    

                       Diet

Whatever the eels eat depends on the size of any creature that crawls around the ocean. They eat slimy & slithery sea creatures they also eat snails all of those slimy & crawly creatures help them to get bigger and stronger. Long finned eels like to eat other eels and they eat anything that they can find out in the oceans, swamps and creeks. Short finned eels like to eat little thing like snails for instance long finned eels like to eat big things like seagulls and other eels I think they eat seagulls.

Language feature

This week we did paragraphs of my report we were learning about language features . I chose this one because I think its a great example out of my other paragraphs. The easy part was writing all my facts. The hard part was finding the information. I could improve by putting more information into my paragraph.          

Diet

Whatever the eels eat depends on the size of any creature that crawls around the ocean. They eat slimy & slithery sea creatures they also eat snails all of those slimy & crawly creatures help them to get bigger and stronger. Long finned eels like to eat other eels and they eat anything that they can find out in the oceans, swamps and creeks. Short finned eels like to eat little thing like snails for instance long finned eels like to eat big things like seagulls and other eels.

My reading

I am learning about eels. My Learning intention is: Making connections text to texts. I know that I have  learnt this because I have reed about it in the book, on YouTube and I've seen the pictures of eels in the book as well.