Poems

This link will take you to my poetry. It's about linking words if your not shore what linking words are then keep reading linking words in poetry is about how can I explain say that my word is shops so I have to come up with six words that comes through my head so shop, meat, beef, cow, cold, frozen these are the six words I thought in my head. The easy part was making this poem. The hard part was figuring the six words by the way our word was Gala so yeah it was pretty hard. I could improve by nothing I did a awesome job at this. My evidence is my link that I set up.

Dear future

This is a poem about earth I think this is good so what are you waiting for have a look. The easy part about this was writing the writing. The hard part was trying so hard to remember the terrific names for some word. I could improve by putting a example like a  picture for beginners

Sorry poem

This week my class and I have been doing a sorry poem I think this might be a good one tell me if this is a good one.
               
Poem
I'm so sad
the earth is mad
keep the earth clean
and don't just walk away and be mean
so grow our trees
the earth will provide us with peas
make mother earth smile
and wait awhile.
 
So what do you think comment and see what you think about my sorry poem.