Thursday 22 September 2016

Soar

This is a story about a girl and a tiny boy. There is a link for you to see after the story if you don't know what a link is it's a thing that you can touch with your mouse. I created this for you to explore it might be too long for those who are not good at reading.I want you to see this wonderful story.


Soar
  1. In the morning.
  2. I saw a little person.
  3. Light the bright blue star.


In the morning I was making aircraft planes. I put the final piece at the end of my aircraft plane and twisted it on tight so it won't collapse I took a breath in. Then I flew it in the crystal blue sky the sun was as bright  you can imagine  but the aircraft plane fell onto the windy grass I closed my eyes before it fell down. “CRASH” then opened them when it was finished I failed once again I walked over to my table feeling sad and miserable, I just felt like giving up.

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2 comments:

  1. Malia21 October 2016 at 09:51

    Hi Jackie my name is Malia and i'm from Kawakawa Primary school in room 5.l really like your presentation on Soar, it's a good story. I think you could have checked your punctuation a bit more but otherwise it's a good piece of writing.

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  2. Jackie5 December 2016 at 12:28

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